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Old 14-03-2009
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what do you think?
again, constructive criticism por favor?
yeah this my second post in two days.
i just got my macbook like a week ago..
now i'm addicted to it and must find something to consume my time :]
PS. I'm new to these message boards so if I seem stupid it's hopefully just that I don't know how to do this nonsense :]

THIS:

FROM THIS (from my phone sorry for poor quality):

TREEEEE:

I did this a while ago. cant decide whether i like it.

OOH SURPRISE a painting :]

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They're pretty good

On the charcoal (I'm assuming that's what it is) drawings you should add some more definite lines, like just one or two on the figures, and on the tree not having such one big joined up line would also benefit, so it's like a suggestion of the line in places. I can't explain what I mean all that well, sorry x(
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your a really good artist.
i could never draw like that lolz
i can't give any advice because well i'm pretty crap at drawing sooo..cool. lolz
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They're pretty good

On the charcoal (I'm assuming that's what it is) drawings you should add some more definite lines, like just one or two on the figures, and on the tree not having such one big joined up line would also benefit, so it's like a suggestion of the line in places. I can't explain what I mean all that well, sorry x(
They're actually just pencil.
yeah i kinda know what you mean, i'm always nervous in adding more though because i dont wanna screw them up!
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i like the last one the best - the one u did in colour
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I love the last one the most.
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i prefer the first one it kindof reminds me of Roahld Dahl
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THOSE ARE SO TOTALLY AWESOME!
I've seen loads of great artist but this beats Leonardo Di Vinci!!!!!!!!
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eh, they're not the best. but they're not the worst. |;

for example, on the first picture; (this is how i work i dont know if it'd work for everyone) try focusing more on the shapes of the shades instead of the man himself, i.e the eye closest to you i would start off with that, get the brow shape and work around the glasses, then to the top of the head. note; the shading on the edge at his forehead? try filling that and gradually working lighter as you go further right to the picture.

-ramble ramble.- haha. just some friendly advice.
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^ wow ti give that advice you must like to draw?
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^ wow ti give that advice you must like to draw?

ermm, kinda. i guess. lol.
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