http://www.troublegum.net/carnwood/

Not really art and photography, but its something i've made and do need the feedback. :p

Ideas so far:
reduce size of images to cut loading time
fix borders so they're even

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It's nice Ben.

Indeed, the borders need fixing.

Ugh, I wish Firefox didn't display a horizontal scrollbar for the iframe.

The text at the top except for the title could do with being slightly bigger.

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The text at the top being the "enjoy your stay" bit?

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Yeh and the two links to the right.

Because the anti-aliasing makes it kinda blurred with the text being the size it is.

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Yah thats true. Those two links sort of disapear anyhow... Hmm. They do need to be a wee bit bigger.

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iframe... x(

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Rofflesticks.

Im not familiar enough with css or includes :p

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*tut tut*

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I liked it

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संस्कृता वाक्
Bitches loves Sanskrit

Thanks, anything you would change?

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Ehmm how about a pattern on the backround a slightly faded one to make it look nice but not distract people.

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संस्कृता वाक्
Bitches loves Sanskrit

Think the mass of brown is too overpowering? I considered that...

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I'd say if you wanted to streamline the appearance a little more, you could make the background of the textbox just slightly darker. Just my misinformed opinion

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Also, yeah, if they're trying to look cosy and warm and traditional, I would add some kind of pattern to the brown background. Something reminiscent of wallpaper. Otherwise, if they want to seem a little more modern, leave it plain.

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I dont know if its misinformed or not, but its very welcome.

Thats the thing... they want traditional, but also modern and simple. So I went mostly modern, with times copy and titling. I dunno. They're hard to work with :p

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With those specs I would say you're on the right track *shrug*

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Ooooooh I would stay there!

I think the brown is a bit too dark though too,
Maybe have a bit more of that lovely cream

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I'm just repeating whats already been said but the 'Enjoy your stay' and the Home/Contact links should be abit bigger imo, but then again if they're bigger it might make the main title look to small.
And maybe a little pattern to break up the solid bakcground, but anything too detailed could look abit =/

It looks really good though :)

EDIT - Yeah what Hep said, cream might look nice

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<3Markeh

I think its too small for my uber resolution :D

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<3Becky

I like it. For the specs you said, I think it's spot on.

Only thing I'd change is to lessen the amount of images you've used, for loading time obv, and just use tables instead. I mean, you've mostly used Times, so it's not as if images are absolutely necessary?

Looking creamy and lickable though!

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I think it looks really good Ben.
Job well done I'd say!.

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change the font of the body text, to something more abnormal than times or w/e, perhaps try verandah

Nah. Times was in the design brief. And besides, verdana or a similar sans serif font is too modern for the purpose of the site.

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Perhaps you could give the buttons a stylish rollover animation, like a flicker.

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